This is a journal about various
factor that have to do with technology and its flaws. Writing is all about
honesty and being creative, and while I write I want to be as honest as I can
with what I think is right and what is not.
First
of all, think whether how many times you've been in a position where you are rushing
to go to places? Or how often do you let the day pass because your lazy at
home? We all go through this situations
more than we're supposed to. Believe or not, people, especially upcoming
generations are turning to slaves and some may be victims to technology. Keep up with the next post to know why!
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ReplyDeleteI really like your blog so far I can't wait to read more about it. This is a topic that really speaks to most teens today so it'll be very interesting to read about. I would've really enjoyed this more if there was more too it. It was a little too short I feel you could've gotten a little more into detail about what angle you're coming at talking about technology, but so far it looks great !
ReplyDeleteI love that you are writing about technology and what really happens using it and its flaws, especially because technology is something we are all obsessed with and use on a daily basis. I think its good you are being completely honest when you are writing it as well. There could have been more details but so far its very good. I'm excited to read your next blog post.
ReplyDeleteI liked your topic. I felt I could really relate to this post. The blog is organized very nicely and creative. I loved how you ended your blog with a tease for next weeks blog. I can't wait to see what's in stored. :)
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